**Motivations:**
- Align the child version with a narrative tone (experiments, hypotheses, open-ended observations)
- Make character dynamics central and mutually shaping (Éon ↔ Barnabé)
**Root causes:**
- The initial child text retained direct technical framing and assertive statements
- Chapter titles and creature names were too explicit and less metaphorical
**Correctifs:**
- Replaced technical vocabulary and declarative phrasing with experiential/hypothetical narration
- Reworked Barnabé as an octopus with a marked temperament that shapes Éon's habits (and vice versa)
- Renamed chapters and entities to more metaphorical, narrative labels
**Evolutions:**
- Integrated Niourk as an implicit ruin/city reference inside the forest setting
**Pages affectées:**
- v0/livre_enfant.md
Co-authored-by: Cursor <cursoragent@cursor.com>
Nicolas Cantu
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