Nicolas Cantu
d2dba9bacb
**Motivations:** - Align the child version with a narrative tone (experiments, hypotheses, open-ended observations) - Make character dynamics central and mutually shaping (Éon ↔ Barnabé) **Root causes:** - The initial child text retained direct technical framing and assertive statements - Chapter titles and creature names were too explicit and less metaphorical **Correctifs:** - Replaced technical vocabulary and declarative phrasing with experiential/hypothetical narration - Reworked Barnabé as an octopus with a marked temperament that shapes Éon's habits (and vice versa) - Renamed chapters and entities to more metaphorical, narrative labels **Evolutions:** - Integrated Niourk as an implicit ruin/city reference inside the forest setting **Pages affectées:** - v0/livre_enfant.md Co-authored-by: Cursor <cursoragent@cursor.com>