**Motivations:** - Ajout skill pour amélioration de documents en background - Scripts et documentation Collatz **Evolutions:** - .cursor/skills/document-improvement/ (SKILL, reference, examples) - v0/collatz_k_scripts/ (core, fusion, pipeline, utils, reproduce) - v0/journal.md, v0/log.md, v0/README collatz **Pages affectées:** - .cursor/skills/document-improvement/ - v0/collatz_k_scripts/ - v0/journal.md, v0/log.md
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Document Improvement — Reference Checklist
Condensed rules for correcting scientific and technical documents. Source: project writing guide.
Titles
| Incorrect | Correct |
|---|---|
| ## Introduction | ## Introduction de [objet/section] |
| ## Conclusion | ## Conclusion de [objet/section] |
All Introduction and Conclusion titles must be at level ##.
Neutrality (strict)
Remove or rewrite:
- Auto-appreciation: "important", "majeur", "robuste", "rigoureux", "ambitieux"
- Editorial justification: "volontairement", "conservateur", "verrou", "discipline"
- Reader address: "le lecteur verra que…" → factual statement
- Introspection: "nous avons choisi…" → neutral formulation
- Meta-commentary on the text itself
Use instead:
- Factual: "On définit…", "On suppose…", "On montre…", "Il s'ensuit…"
- Structural references: "voir Chapitre X", "d'après la Proposition Y" (without evaluative terms)
Transitions
- Replace "La continuation ainsi…" by content-driven transitions
- Each paragraph should follow from the mathematical content, not from meta-phrases
- Avoid "on poursuit de la même manière" without specifying what follows
Hypotheses and results
- Before each lemma, proposition, theorem: state hypotheses explicitly
- In the proof: indicate when each hypothesis is used
- No implicit or "obvious" hypotheses
References and citations
- Cite exact source (theorem, page, equation number)
- Avoid "il est bien connu que" without reference
- For overlap with literature: state the difference (hypotheses, framework) factually
Quantifiers and domains
- Explicit quantifiers: "pour tout", "il existe", "il existe un unique" with clear domain
- Explicit domain of definition for functions and operators
- Validity conditions in the statement, not only in the proof
Terminology
- One concept = one term throughout
- No fluctuating synonyms for the same object
- For long documents: recall local conventions at section start if needed
Proofs
- No "il est facile de voir" or "on laisse au lecteur" without a precise pointer
- Either detail the argument or refer to a lemma/reference
- Long calculations: state the intermediate result, move details to appendix with reference
Conjectures and open questions
- Neutral formulation: "On conjecture que…", "Il serait naturel de se demander si…"
- No overstatement of importance
- Limits of the framework: recall restrictive hypotheses in section conclusion if relevant
Voice and tense
- Present atemporal for mathematical statements
- Uniform voice: either "on" or passive throughout
- Future only for explicit forward references ("on verra en 4.2 que…")
Quick scan patterns
When scanning a chunk, flag:
## Introductionor## Conclusionwithout "de …"- "important", "majeur", "volontairement", "verrou", "discipline"
- "Le lecteur", "on laisse au lecteur", "il est facile de voir"
- "La continuation ainsi", "on poursuit de la même manière"
- "il est bien connu que" without citation