Nicolas Cantu
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Livre enfant: améliorations narratives v0.2
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**Motivations:**
- Renforcer la trajectoire dramatique et la singularité d'Éon
- Varier les régimes narratifs pour 9-12 ans
- Appliquer les recommandations de l'avis de fond éditorial
**Root causes:**
- N/A (évolution, non correction)
**Correctifs:**
- N/A
**Evolutions:**
- Tension temporelle (temps qui passe pour le lecteur)
- Menace sur Barnabé (ventouse glisse au pont, peur Ch.12)
- Échecs avant réussites (Ch.9, Ch.11)
- Fausse stabilité (Ch.10)
- Préparation scène scolaire (Ch.1, Ch.16)
- Singularisation Éon (peur précise, tremblé, clignement)
- Formule récurrente (Un pas, puis un autre)
- Franchissement mur accentué (Ch.14)
- Documentation dans docs/features/
**Pages affectées:**
- pour enfants/livre_enfant.md
- docs/features/livre_enfant_ameliorations_narratives.md
- .cursor/rules/redaction-pour-enfant.mdc
Made-with: Cursor
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