Nicolas Cantu
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Livre enfant v0.37 — Critique appliquée
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**Motivations:**
- Appliquer la critique fournie pour finition littéraire du manuscrit
**Root causes:**
- N/A (évolutions)
**Correctifs:**
- Scène sous la manche : reconnaissance tactile au lieu de visuelle (cohérence sensorielle)
- Le trône vide : retrait phrase interprétative (E3)
- La vallée efface : dialogue remplacé par geste (régime quasi-silence)
- Colline, Souffle, Terre : resserrement des blocs explicatifs
- Fatigue ch. 6 : ajout reprise souffle après chute
- Transition ch. 6 → 7 : ouverture « Le sol se raffermit peu à peu »
**Evolutions:**
- Passe microstylistique complémentaire
- 3 règles ajoutées dans redaction-pour-enfant.mdc (cohérence sensorielle, régime quasi-silence, resserrement)
**Pages affectées:**
- pour enfants/livre_enfant.md
- docs/features/livre_enfant_eon_v0.33.md
- .cursor/rules/redaction-pour-enfant.mdc
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