--- author: 4NK Team date: 2026-02-17 scope: v0/livre.md (Chapter 14) type: fix --- # Fix: Neutralize editorial/meta phrasing in Chapter 14 (`v0/livre.md`) ## Problem Chapter 14 in `v0/livre.md` contained a few editorial/meta formulations (e.g. “strict”, “de façon rigoureuse”, “volontairement minimale”) inside result announcements or definition commentary, instead of stating the content directly. ## Impacts - Introduces editorial framing in the main text rather than descriptive statements tied to definitions and propositions. - Creates inconsistency with the neutral technical style expected across chapters. ## Cause Drafting-layer phrasing persisted in the Chapter 14 slice of `v0/livre.md`. ## Root cause Neutral-style rewrites were not applied consistently for Chapter 14 during manual consolidation. ## Fix applied Applied the correction **only** in `v0/livre.md` (Chapter 14): - Replaced “L’ordre de construction est strict …” with a direct ordering statement (“L’ordre de construction est : …”). - Replaced “peut alors être formulé de façon rigoureuse” with “se formule ainsi”. - Replaced “Cette définition est volontairement minimale” with “Cette définition est minimale”. ## Affected pages - `v0/livre.md` ## Deployment / regeneration considerations - If `v0/livre.md` is regenerated from `v0/chapitre*.md`, this fix can be overwritten. The generating pipeline should be checked if these phrasings reappear. ## Analysis / verification steps - Search Chapter 14 for editorial/meta markers (e.g. `strict`, `rigoureux*`, `volontairement`) and rewrite into descriptive statements.