--- author: 4NK Team date: 2026-02-17 scope: v0/livre.md (Chapter 16) type: fix --- # Fix: Neutralize meta-phrasing and align lexicon in Chapter 16 (`v0/livre.md`) ## Problem Chapter 16 in `v0/livre.md` contained: - meta/editorial lead-ins for result announcements (e.g. “résultat attendu… strictement technique”), - terminology not aligned with the canonical lexicon requested by corrective chapters 30/32 (use of “cône(s) de futur” instead of “futur accessible”), - emphasis phrasing in explanatory passages (e.g. “La distinction est cruciale…”, “Le point essentiel…”). ## Impacts - Adds meta framing instead of direct descriptive statements. - Breaks terminological consistency with the “one concept, one term” policy for the core text. ## Cause Drafting-layer phrasing and pre-lexicon terminology remained in the Chapter 16 slice of `v0/livre.md`. ## Root cause Neutral-style rewrites and the canonical lexicon audit were not applied consistently to Chapter 16 during manual consolidation. ## Fix applied Applied the correction **only** in `v0/livre.md` (Chapter 16): - Replaced result-announcement meta phrasing with a direct lead-in (`On obtient :`). - Replaced “cône(s) de futur” with the canonical “futur accessible” in the Chapter 16 section title and definition lead-in. - Replaced “La distinction est cruciale …” with a descriptive statement (no task/utility required; statistical coupling only). - Replaced “Le point essentiel …” with a direct statement (“Il s’agit …”). ## Affected pages - `v0/livre.md` ## Deployment / regeneration considerations - If `v0/livre.md` is regenerated from `v0/chapitre*.md`, this fix can be overwritten. The generating pipeline should be checked if these phrasings or terms reappear. ## Analysis / verification steps - In the Chapter 16 slice, search for result-announcement meta markers and emphasis qualifiers, and rewrite into descriptive statements. - In the Chapter 16 slice, enforce the canonical term `futur accessible` and avoid rejected synonyms.