**Motivations:**
- Enforce a neutral technical writing style for contributions
- Remove self-evaluative editorial phrasing that distracts from definitions and results
**Root causes:**
- The text contained meta-judgments about importance/rigor ("main contribution", "conceptually decisive", "voluntarily...", etc.) that do not state mathematical facts
- Redaction guidelines did not explicitly prohibit this style, so it reappeared across chapters
**Correctifs:**
- Update ` IA_agents/redaction.md` with explicit prohibitions, allowed phrasing, and a self-check checklist
- Trim those evaluative methodological one-liners across `v0/livre.md` to keep statements factual
**Evolutions:**
- Make the writing rules explicit and keep the manuscript more readable and neutral
**Pages affectées:**
- IA_agents/redaction.md
- v0/livre.md
Co-authored-by: Cursor <cursoragent@cursor.com>
**Motivations:**
- Reduce ambiguity between transmissible memory, hidden variables, and non-Markovian projections
- Make the scope of quantification/interpretation explicit (indexation by mu/P/d/c/L) and improve scientific navigability
**Root causes:**
- Layer boundaries (ensemblist vs measured/probabilistic vs decision vs thermodynamic) were not always explicit, enabling over-interpretations
- Some passages mixed interpretative readings with core results without a uniform "hypotheses -> statement -> optional reading" discipline
**Correctifs:**
- Add an explicit "memory" note (transmissible register vs omitted state) and require state/projection clarity when invoking memory
- Clarify the default status of transition cost c as a graph weight and separate physical instantiations as optional, declared dictionaries
- Reframe cosmological/ontological sections as conditional interpretations and tighten wording that could imply teleology
**Evolutions:**
- Add per-chapter "Hypotheses and results" markers to separate assumptions, results, and status
- Introduce symbol/dependency indices, a quantification choices registry, and a robustness protocol; add discrete<->continuous repères and explicit non-transferability warnings
**Pages affectées:**
- v0/livre.md
Co-authored-by: Cursor <cursoragent@cursor.com>
